Rough Cuts



This is the first rough cut; we had scenes missing as we were not able to film the rest of our scenes in school due to boys not being allowed on site. Therefore this meant that we had to change our initial story line for the final piece. This is the reason why we have two rough cuts.



This is our second rough cut. After changing most of our story line we managed to get our movie filmed. But, the rough cut still needed to be improved. We changed many things such as the credits ‘beep’ noise stopped playing halfway through the credits. Then we noticed that the toilet scene was too jumpy due to the camera shots, we fixed this by using different types of shots such as mid shots and close up.

What people had to say about our movie

To get an audiences view of our rough cut, we showed some people and interviewed two of them. They gave us some constructive criticism which we took on board when making our final piece.